I'm trying to reform. Instead of "aiming at a target," I now "work toward a goal." Instead of "warring with my competitors," I "adversely interact with them." Instead of 'picking out the gun and the bullets that are right for the target" I "select the implements appropriate for the job."
Improvement? Well, no, but it does sound more civilized, more peaceful.
Which is all a way of saying that it puts readers/listeners to sleep sooner.
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